judges thoughts

Name of photographer
-General focus of portfolio (photoj, sports, stories, etc.)
-List three problems that the judges note with the portfolio
-List two things the judges like
-What is your overall impression? What did you like or not like?

portfolio #1
Alyssa shukar
stories
1.all pictures were at a certain distance and not getting close and personal 2.not enough strong singles 3.needs more optimism
1.the judges liked the picture of the guy sweeping the street with a shovel 2.nice graphics in some pictures
i liked a few of the pictures but overall it was kind of boring

portfolio #2
Justin Mott
stories
1.needs to be more focused 2.doesn't make alot of sense 3.person didn't quite pay attention when putting their portfolio together
1.likes the details 2. had good compisition
this person over all had a good story line going on i enjoyed it

portfolio #3
Nick Adams
sports
1.needs better focus 2. needs to have the story match the picture 3.needs to be careful to not drag the eye to objects that weren't ment to be the main focus
1.good lighting 2.good graphics
overall the sports theme was really nice

portfolio #4
Jordan Murph
sports
1.got a little of task 2.needs better lighting 3.some pictures really didn't belong
1. good composition 2.great focus