
Wednesday, May 14, 2008
Friday, April 25, 2008
pic
picture made into art
that your still you when your jumbled in a mess
i like the 3-d effect
it shows life and death in some wierd odd orangy way
i lov how they combined the orange peel with something random
it shows wat the counrty is about in one drink
i like how the flag fades into the liquir
Wednesday, April 9, 2008
Wednesday, March 26, 2008
long center blog
1.pattern
2.sorroundings
3.sorroundings
4.sorroundings
5.angles and shapes
6.lighting
7.lighting
8.angles and shapes
9.lighting
10.lighting
11.lighting
12.sorroundings
13.patterns
14.lighting
15.angles and shapes
16.angles and shapes
critique:
picture 9 i really like how the lighting is on the building and you can still see the sky which is barely light up at all the photographer couldn't have taken this picture at a more perfect time.
i love the angle of the picture this person did a fantastic job
2.sorroundings
3.sorroundings
4.sorroundings
5.angles and shapes
6.lighting
7.lighting
8.angles and shapes
9.lighting
10.lighting
11.lighting
12.sorroundings
13.patterns
14.lighting
15.angles and shapes
16.angles and shapes
critique:
picture 9 i really like how the lighting is on the building and you can still see the sky which is barely light up at all the photographer couldn't have taken this picture at a more perfect time.
i love the angle of the picture this person did a fantastic job
Monday, March 17, 2008
judges thoughts
Name of photographer
-General focus of portfolio (photoj, sports, stories, etc.)
-List three problems that the judges note with the portfolio
-List two things the judges like
-What is your overall impression? What did you like or not like?
portfolio #1
Alyssa shukar
stories
1.all pictures were at a certain distance and not getting close and personal 2.not enough strong singles 3.needs more optimism
1.the judges liked the picture of the guy sweeping the street with a shovel 2.nice graphics in some pictures
i liked a few of the pictures but overall it was kind of boring
portfolio #2
Justin Mott
stories
1.needs to be more focused 2.doesn't make alot of sense 3.person didn't quite pay attention when putting their portfolio together
1.likes the details 2. had good compisition
this person over all had a good story line going on i enjoyed it
portfolio #3
Nick Adams
sports
1.needs better focus 2. needs to have the story match the picture 3.needs to be careful to not drag the eye to objects that weren't ment to be the main focus
1.good lighting 2.good graphics
overall the sports theme was really nice
portfolio #4
Jordan Murph
sports
1.got a little of task 2.needs better lighting 3.some pictures really didn't belong
1. good composition 2.great focus
-General focus of portfolio (photoj, sports, stories, etc.)
-List three problems that the judges note with the portfolio
-List two things the judges like
-What is your overall impression? What did you like or not like?
portfolio #1
Alyssa shukar
stories
1.all pictures were at a certain distance and not getting close and personal 2.not enough strong singles 3.needs more optimism
1.the judges liked the picture of the guy sweeping the street with a shovel 2.nice graphics in some pictures
i liked a few of the pictures but overall it was kind of boring
portfolio #2
Justin Mott
stories
1.needs to be more focused 2.doesn't make alot of sense 3.person didn't quite pay attention when putting their portfolio together
1.likes the details 2. had good compisition
this person over all had a good story line going on i enjoyed it
portfolio #3
Nick Adams
sports
1.needs better focus 2. needs to have the story match the picture 3.needs to be careful to not drag the eye to objects that weren't ment to be the main focus
1.good lighting 2.good graphics
overall the sports theme was really nice
portfolio #4
Jordan Murph
sports
1.got a little of task 2.needs better lighting 3.some pictures really didn't belong
1. good composition 2.great focus
Friday, February 8, 2008
this is a environmental portrait giving off the depressing effect of the lady on her death bed. She is about to die and it is a very sad moment in this persons life. The lighting is a natural coming from the window and reflecting off of the white blanket.
i read about 15 min. and i found a really great poem that i liked called justice.
Justice
That Justice is a blind goddessIs a thing to which we black are wise:Her bandage hides two festering soresThat once perhaps were eyes.
Langston Hughes
Wednesday, January 30, 2008
best covers
1-environmental 2-informal 9-formal 10-informal 11- environmental 13-environmental 15-formal 19-formal 21-environmental
24-informal 26-formal 27-environmental (favorite) 28-environmental 31-environmental 32-formal
35-informal 36-formal 37details-formal 37glamour-formal 37national-environmental 37time-formal
#27 Entertainment Weekly (May 2, 2003) The Dixie Chicks appear naked on this cover of Entertainment Weekly with slogans such as “Boycott,” “Traitors,” “Hero” and “Proud Americans” printed on their bodies. Two months before, member Natalie Maines criticized the impending invasion of Iraq by President George Bush at a concert in London. This remark sparked intense criticism from many Americans who subsequently boycotted The Dixie Chicks music and concerts. In their interview with Entertainment Weekly, the group discussed their reaction to the criticism and what lies ahead for them in the country music industry.
My critique
This cover has really good lighting and the portrait looks really good everything just kinda matches. it is communicated that these girls are facing something that most people cant face. they show that its ok to be yourself. This cover was hard to decide whether it is informal or environmental because it tells people about the message that is within i decided to make it environmental because they were nude but then again environmental is all about the message and not the people but on this cover it is saying that the people are the message.
24-informal 26-formal 27-environmental (favorite) 28-environmental 31-environmental 32-formal
35-informal 36-formal 37details-formal 37glamour-formal 37national-environmental 37time-formal
#27 Entertainment Weekly (May 2, 2003) The Dixie Chicks appear naked on this cover of Entertainment Weekly with slogans such as “Boycott,” “Traitors,” “Hero” and “Proud Americans” printed on their bodies. Two months before, member Natalie Maines criticized the impending invasion of Iraq by President George Bush at a concert in London. This remark sparked intense criticism from many Americans who subsequently boycotted The Dixie Chicks music and concerts. In their interview with Entertainment Weekly, the group discussed their reaction to the criticism and what lies ahead for them in the country music industry.
My critique
This cover has really good lighting and the portrait looks really good everything just kinda matches. it is communicated that these girls are facing something that most people cant face. they show that its ok to be yourself. This cover was hard to decide whether it is informal or environmental because it tells people about the message that is within i decided to make it environmental because they were nude but then again environmental is all about the message and not the people but on this cover it is saying that the people are the message.
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